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Topic : Environmental protection

Do you think I will environmental protection? Nowadays, Hong Kong pollution problem is very serious. For example greenhouse effect and air pollution. In this article, I will talk about air pollution and water pollution.
        First of all, there are many environmental problems in Hong Kong. New, I will talk air pollution because this pollution in Hong Kong is very serious. Hong Kong people always drive the car, will carbon dioxide. Some people will feel disgusting and may be sick.
        Apart from that, water pollution is also serious in Hong Kong. The second problem, I will talk water pollution because Hong Kong people can not protect marine life. Since Hong Kong people don't protect marine life will endangered species.
        In order to protect the environment, we should use public transport reduce drive the car to improve air pollution problem. We can conserve energy and use energy-efficient bulb. Face to water pollution problem, the government could using greener methods of waste disposal reduce people from rubbish.
        All in all, it is important to protect the environment on your side, cutting down on consumption, recycling domestic waste, conserving energy and using cleaner fuels. The pollution problem is very serious because aftermath people will dead.

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I English is really not good, but I will never gave up learning English
Re chiuandy123 : I am F.5 student,you think I writing is what from degree?

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